Sunday, June 20, 2010

chap.3

Malehindras' P.O.V. time=midnight

"Now is the time.i have a total of 15 knifes.I already know where she lives.She lives with carson and Liliana.I cant wait to kill him!"

Lilianas' P.O.V.

"huh?(all in a dream.)
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NO!!!!!YOU CANT KILL ALICE!!!!!!!!SHE IS THE CHOSEN HEIR!!I WILL RISK MY LIFE TO SAVE HER!IN FACT THATS WHAT IM HERE FOR!!!!!!"
"same here" "what Carson!This is my battle.you stay inside and help her!"
"fine.you better hold Malehindra though.we have to have enough time to teleport."
"i know!now go and help her!!!!
(ending her P.O.V.)
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Alices' P.O.V.

"man!i cant go to sleep.doesnt help that im the only one up.huh?!falling asleep
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(no dream)(waking up after 7 hrs)
"AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

End of chap. hope you like it!its kinda weird...~_~but comment!^_^

2 comments:

  1. oooooooooooo! suspense! kinda confusing tho. who was talking during lillianas pov?

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