chap.10 name=the first defeat

(BACK IN TIME....)
(Alices' MOMS' P.O.V.)

"NO MAX!THIS BABY CANT HURT YOU!SHE IS JUST A BABY!" "No...she is much more than that.she is a princess and we cant have any new rulers ehh?so that means that you must die TONIGHT!" "NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

(Alice does this...) "hahaha hahahaha hahaha ra ma la op poo no on um mum....
(and just then was when sparkeles appeared.)"AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!
(Max flew back)
*gasp* "Alice!how did you do that?!" *laughs* "well....you are your mother and fathers baby. isnt that right my little princess." "well now that Max is gone,and plans on killing us....we must have war..." "war is not the only answer...maybe he's just loneley.we should visit him.but lets leave our baby with Lilianas' and Carsons' parents." "that would be good dear" "ok.hello?carson!you scared me." "ah ga ma" "ok. hello my queen" "oh no need for that.i need you to do me a big favor and keep this baby well hidden from Max." "ok my queen" "here is some money for her,and your family." "WOW.how much is in here?!" "9 billion dollars. now dont show it off.we dont want anyone to know that she lives here." "ok.well.good-bye!" "bye.and thank-you so much." "my pleasure" "good bye my little princess!" "ah ah poo" "your kids are too young to remember all of this right?" "yes." "ok.bye!"

(entering his palace again.)

"GAURDS!BRING THEM TO ME!!!!!!!" "um...this is a nice place...i guess" "why have you come?" "we wanted to visit you." "where is your baby?" "in a hidding place."
"why?" "from you trying to kill her!" "but why?" "we refuse to tell you." "fine.then...YOU WILL BE MURDERED TONIGHT!" "AAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!"


and that was the end for the king and queen protecting their loved one.

Carsons' P.O.V. @ the age of 14 yrs. old

*thinking....*Alice is so beautiful.she's the prettest person i've seen alive."CARSON!" "oh.sorry mom.what?" " i said to go wake alice and your sister Lilinana up!" "ok." "Alice....wake up...." "huh?oh.it's you Carson.Youknow...your really cute." "as much as you are pretty?" "oh no...ok." "i have to go wake Liliana up.....um....maybe we can get together later...." "oh.ok. *laughing*" "maybe...dinner?" "ok."
"LILIANA!GET UP!"(shaking her wileldly.) "ok!im up!im up!"

Now Carson is 17 while Alice is 16

"this is really nice." "yah." "ok"

"Alice....will you be my new girlfriend?"

end of chap.10!!!!!i <3 this 1! please comment!^_^