Tuesday, October 19, 2010

chap.34 You will die Connor...

                                                      Connors' P.O.V.

*Stupid Max. Going and killing everybody...what if i killed you?would that be funny?* "Well...i was thinking that for you..." "Max!!!WHERE ARE YOU?!" "hiding....And if you dont know how to hide well...i might get inside your body to kill yourself....and everything YOU think goes into MY head." "Oh yea? Well bring it on! You can't hurt me!" "oh really...." (gulp)



*****************************************************************************

"Max,you will regret this.........."

"no.............Your whole family will just die in front of your face. Just as yours is bleeding now....."

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!



(yes there is no one saying that.)
srry for the super small chap........i just have to go.love ya all! :) end of chap. 34

Monday, September 20, 2010

hi everyone!and sorry

            srry i havnt been writing in 4eva.ill start writing in a little.
~Kylie

Thursday, August 19, 2010

chap.33 run away Alice.

                                                    Alices' P.O.V.


                                                      "Liliana,our girls are getting older by the second.And the same with us.
                                       It scares me.Because the age that i am now....is the age that my parents
                            were murdured." "Oh Alice.no need to worry about them.Just remember that you can talk
             to them whenever you want." "WHAT?!?!" "Oh i'm sorry for not telling you that." *sigh* "it's ok.
     I need to go meditate.Hey,when the girls get here,just tell them im metitating so dont bother me unless it's an enmergency." "ok Alice,but not a good idea.not a really good idea." "I need to Liliana.i must have to.It's almost not a choise for me.I want to ask them if i can take the crown along with the kids." "ok.but be quick!school gets out in 10 mins.!" "I'll take my time."
**********************************************************************************
                                                               Meditating
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mom
                                              "Alice.You can't take the throne.You are in danger." "But how?" "Let you
                              Listen to the chrildren"
                                   dad"Yes you are Alice.And you need to find another home."
me.(alice)
"Mom,Dad,I miss you so much." "We know.And...you've dont so much to save the world."
Whatever you do Alice.DO NOT, take the throne."
*********************************************************************************
done meditating
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"MOM!!!!!!!!WHERE ARE YOU?!?!?!?!?!" "LILY?!?!WHAT'S WRONG?!" "We HAVE to talk.Like...
now."
(thinking)
"Let you listen to the children" "ok.but we have to be quick about it."
*********************************************************************************
telling story.
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"Mom....i just dont feel safe." "I understand.But we have to stay here a little." "WHAT?!?!?!WHY?!"
"I want to meet her again.see if i can change her.But no need to worry.I can try to change her." "ok mom."
"I called your father and he said he would be here in 2 mins.

"sorry." "i came from the gym." "Can we talk alone?" "oh..um...ok.?"
*********************************telling story.************************************

"And..well.....We can't moove yet." "Well....ok." "first,i need to do something." "What's that?" "I need to go and well.......fight someone." "Who?" "Max." "I think i saw him at work.............."

~End of chap.33 Please comment! ^_^

Sunday, August 8, 2010

chap.32

                                                             Lilys' P.O.V.

                                          "Hey little a!" "huh?oh.it's you." "What's the matter?jealous of my dress?"
                         "WHAT?NO!mine?" "NO WAY!" "Well...meet him later then." "ok."
    
           ********************************************************************

                                                "NNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!" "what's the
                          matter Little a?" "There is this new girl at school named Lily and her brother Tanner,well,
          Lily stole my boyfriend!Look!There she is making out with my boyfriend!"
"ok Lily.here she comes.look natural." "um...ok?"
"Oh hi little A." "hi." "ok."

"You look familiar....." "Oh really?me?I don't think i know you Lily." "Wait...if your new to the school..how would you know my name?" "um.....friends?" "ok.." "I'm the most popular girl." "Do you mind if i ask what you mothers name is?" "um.....Maranda...." "Oh.thank-you...do you mind?I'm going to have a quick talk with Little A." "That's fine. i have to get back to school anyway." "ok."
"Little A.!That is Lily!and by Lily,i mean, Lestorcamabooet!and Tanner is Ticometer!remember when we were young when our mom would tell us those stories?And that's why she said to keep it a secret that we are really supposed to be in a palace?" "OMG.Lily,we HAVE to go tell our moms'.Ya!No kidding!"


~end of chap.32!please comment!!!!!!!!!!!!!^_^



Friday, August 6, 2010

sad me.:(

                                                      Hi everyone.:(yesterday,my great grandma died.last night,i cried my eyes
                                   out,and this morning when i woke up,my face was wet.i had been crying all night in
                   my sleep.:(so if i end up coming to the webshow...i prob. wont be so enthusiastic.But that's if
     i DO come.my mom,aunt,and grandpa anyone in my family doesn't really want to go anywhere.we're all so miserable.so...ya.I've been trying to get my mind off of it...but i just cant.:'( I'll try to keep writing my story.and don't worry.its getting closer to being done.:) Don't forget to comment also!I'll write as much as i can.Thanks for reading.

-AUTHOR
Don't worry.I'll keep writing.:)

Thursday, August 5, 2010

chap.31

                                           ***************9 years later*******************

                                                   *shopping*   Little As' P.O.V.

                                           "Oh mom!how about this for meeting Lilys' bf?" "no way."
                                  "Why not?" "never mind.just find something else." "Well Lily and i never ended up meeting each others bfs', and...we grew out of those other ones." "ugh.you girls are lucky to have us as parents. how about this one?"
                                                "Cute enough?" "of course." "now your all ready."

                                                       Lilys' P.O.V.
                                                       "I cant believe that we are finally going to meet each others bfs!"
                                    "good for you two." "YEAH!MOM WE HAVE TO PICK OUT AN OUTFIT!"
               "i knew you were going to say that." "ya." "found one Lily!"

"i am so excited!" "i know you are."


(same time saying of little a and lily.)
"she is going to be so jealous."

                    ~done with chap.31!please comment!srry super short!

Monday, August 2, 2010

Chap.30 the meeting....

little As' P.O.V.

" hey mom!i need help!" "with what dear?"
"Lily and i are going to meet eachothers boyfriends!"
"Oh.well dont you think that be a little dangorous?" "no...why?"
"Well....nevermind.Your too little to understand." "aww please mom?"
"no.now lets go get you outfit."

Lilys' P.O.V.

"hi mom!" "ok.what is it that you need?" "How did you know --"
"What you were going to say?well ill teach you when your 13."
"ugh.fine. anyway...i need a new dress." "ok....OH!i have the perfect one."
"oh good!"

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"I cant wait to go!ill finally be able to see what he looks like!"
(little a is making the same exact thing)

"Well?how do you like it?" "i love it mom."
(little A is saying the same exact thing.)
"She is going to be so jelous!"
~end of chap.30 srry super short!my computer is going weird!

Friday, July 30, 2010

blah.

Dude.I am not even kidding you.
im being like the person who is getting hurt a TON!
first i burnt my finger,then at the minnicks' house,i got a
bruise on my shin,then i might of sprained my wrist!O.M.G. what is the matter with me?!?!?!

-AUTHOR

Monday, July 19, 2010

hold up

Hey every1!i have a slight problem.i burned my vein on a flat iron,and i cant type at all with my left hand.so...im typing verry slowly.i will continiue writting when my hand is healed.ok?thank-you and KEEP READING!!!!
-AUTHOR of In The Hall Of The Mountain King

chap.29 name=invite movies

Lilys' P.O.V.

"Mom?" "yes?" "can you take me andmy boyfriend to the movies?
Please?" "you never told me his name.or little As'.*sigh* My
Boyfriends name is Jake.and hers is Danniel.Dan for short."
"oh.ok.what movie do you guys want to see?" "Harry Potter please! and
Twilight!" "ok."

**************MOVIE WATCHING*******************

*I HAD MY FIRST KISS AND MOM DOESNT EVEN KNOW!haha!i HAVE to tell Little A!!!!!!!

"No fair!My mom said that she has to get to know their parents first."
"haha!" "its not funny Lily!" "ok!im sorry.hey...maybe tomorrow,we can meet eachothers boyfriends!" "that would be cool!" "ok.we'll do it first thing tomorrow at recess." "deal." "deal."
end of chap.30 srry its short!and suckish!comment!

chap.28

Alices' P.O.V.

"Liliana,kids grow up so fast." "tell me about it." "no.i mean
Like espeically Lily.today she asked me if she could wear make-up!"
"already?!she's only 8.....today!" *sigh* "i know.she lookes exactly like me
if you were to go back in my pictures." "Well...you aren't jokeing about that."
"Hey Liliana,when does Connor get off work?" "well...Connor said that he got the same job as Carson....so...same time....i hope." "oh.ok.so 5:00" "i dont know.i guess."
"Moooommm!!!!!!" "oh how was school Lily?" "good!i just got a date too!" "Lily."
"muuuumm.he's cute.
"isn't he cute?!" "Lily." "mom.im sorry.i just couldn't resist." *sigh* "ok then."
"Mommy!" "Little A.!how was school?" "awesome!except when Lily ditched me." "tell me.what was so good about school?" "i got a boyfriend!" "oh.well.ok sweetie." "i have a picture of him!" "ok.let me see."
"he is cute.just like you." "hahaha"
"so Lily.when is your first date?Well...we are just boyfriend and girlfriend until 7th grade." "what if you dont last that long?" "oh trust me mom,we will.for sure."
"ok then."
end of chap.28!comment!

oops!

that last chap.!it was supposed to be chap.27
Kathleen found that!so thanx!keep reading!

chap.26

Alices' P.O.V.

"whaaaaahhh!WHAAAAH!""WHAAAAAAHHHH!"
"aww.isn't this cute Liliana?they were born the same exact day."
"yes.indeed it is." "What will you name yours?" "i am going to name
mine....Alice." "aww.your so sweet.ill name mine LIliana.and Lily for short."
"ill name mine little A for short." "haha.ok"
*********************6 YEARS LATER*******************


Lilys' P.O.V.

"finally i just got my first date!he is so cute.and it really helps that every boy has a huge crush on me.haha.hey.i want to tell little A.where did she go?"

Little As' P.O.V.

"Where did she go?All i did was go to the bathroom,next
thing i know,shes' gone!ugh Lily!"
end of chap.26!please comnment!

chap.26

Alices' P.O.V.
*Well....carson is trustworthy....he should know when im due.*
"Hey Carson....how long?" "Well look and guess!"

"i dont know." "your 9 months due.everyone thought you died.you were asleep for a long time."
"Well it is definatly noticeable.Hey where is Liliana?" "in the bed next to you.."
"WHAT IS THE MATTER WITH HER?!?!""dont worry.she is pregnant too." "oh really?!" "well good for the both of us." "yep."

"I like the clothes they dressed us in.What about you alice?" "huh?oh.yes. i love them too."
end of chap.26!hope you like it!comment pwease!

chap.25

Carsons' P.O.V.

*thinking*how is it that possible....
"Alice!I know how you can kill Maranda!!!!!" "Well hurry and tell me now!"
*at an estimated time of 14 degrees,turn an exact right,and hit oh her back while stabbing her stomach right after....* "ok alice!just concentrate and you will know what to do!" "ITS KIND OF HARD TO CONCENTRATE RIGHT NOW!" "just do it."*concentrating.*"ok.i know what to do....."
*PUNCH STABB* "Carson...I DID IT!" "i knew you could."
And thats when Alice fainted from loss of blood.
Alices' P.O.V.
*Where am i?* "Your in the hospital." "huh?oh Carson!" "don't. you
need to relax." "ok.What happened?" "you fainted from the loss of blood
is what i thought...but..." "but what?" "Your pregnant." *gasp!*
srry its short!~_~ please comment!

Monday, July 5, 2010

chap.24

Alices' P.O.V.

"CARSON!LILIANA!HELP!AHH!" "ALICE!" "CARSON!HURRY!KILL HER!"
a knife went right threw maranda.and got me a little in the arm."AHHH!"
"Alice!!she can hurt you!" "but she is a hollagram!" "i know.now go and fight her!"
"ugh!i cant carson!" "alice.im sorry.but i cant.she is blocking everyone else but you." "AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!"

chap.23 name=the run

Alices' P.O.V.

"OH MY GOSH!Were should i go Maranda?!" "i would choose somewhere wise.
nothing to obvious,but yet to.....easy." "what do you mean?" "im saying...... you should hide in his castle."*gasp* "WHAT?WHY?!" "he would never expect you to be there...since he killed your parents there."Tears shreded down my face. "im sorry alice...its just tha-----" "MARANDA!HOW COULD YOU SAY SOMETHING LIKE THAT TO ME?!?! YOU WERE IN THE ROOM WHEN THEY DIED!AND DIDNT EVEN TRY TO STOP YOUR HUSBAND!" "Alice!" "Let the man that killed my parents be gone along with the one and only evil wife that tries to kill me no----" "NO!" "AAHHHHH!WHY ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME?!?!omg that is the knife that malehindra used to kill my parents!" "yes.of course little girl.boy are you stupid." "AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!

end of chap.23 sorry.i cant print pics. on this computer.im on my grandpas. sorry its short!comment!

ok!

I am going to start writing again!yay!

so be prepared.................

Monday, June 28, 2010

so sorry


I am so sorry for taking forever to write...
Ive just been so busy lately and idk.im going to wrtie in a little.
I know everything...just so busy.I will write as much as possible.
Thank-you!dont forget to read.

Tuesday, June 22, 2010

chap.22

alices' P.O.V.

"What is your name?" "thank-you for asking but my name origanally
was Marry then when i got married to Max,aka malehindra,i changed it to
Maranda." "hey.i think that's a pretty name." "which one?" "both.But i like
Maranda" "oh.um....thank you." "but i'm not here for distruction."(relef went through the room) "But my son and daughter is." *gasp!* everywhere. "i just came here for the wedding." "You arn't as bad i expected an evil villan to be..." "Well that's because i'm not really evil.He locked me because of my beauty and wanted to marry me.We had two kids and their names are Tanner and Lily.And their names now are Ticometer and Lestorcamabooet.But....they take after their father...at least...they used to....i started to teach the kids about just how bad their father was so i had to change their minds.not litarally..but...like....oh nevermind." "ok. Well...time for the party for all of us!" "Yup" "O.M.G.!Liliana.you scared me." "oh.sorry."
*having a great time*

"mom?" "yes dear?" "dad is calling from the dead."
"OH MY GOSH!" "What's the matter Maranda?!" "my husband is still trying to kill you."
*gasp* "how?!" "from the dead world.They have an extra life!and he's trying to kill you with that extra life.You should like get the heck out of here."

end of chap.22! please comment!

chap.21

Alices' P.O.V.

Well everything was going fine until Carson and i found out
That Liliana has had a boyfriend like just a little while ago.
She showed us some pics. for proof......
When she was 15... When she found out she had to risk her life for mine...

We were kinda mad when we found out.But who cares!They're getting married in a couple of hours.And we were first on the list.And by the way,we just barely found out that his name was Conner.

"Connor,do you take this beloved woman to be your wife?" "I do" "Liliana,do your take this beloved man to be your husband?" "I do" "you may kiss the bride"
And then after they kissed,Malehindras' wife came in......

"oh.Maybe i should do a more...lievely color....

"Much better.And now for the good part....."

end of chap.21!Like i said.it doesn't end when you think it does.please comment!

Chap.20

Alices' P.O.V.

"I like how we can just telepot back to your house." "same here."

"remember our first kiss?" "yes.or that one time after prom?"

"yes....or....

When the family went on a cruise?and we got to share?insead of Me and Liliana?" "yes. now....Alice....I love you." "i love you too." "Alice....all we have to do is wait 1 more year." "yep.i can't wait.but first can we PLEASE just get Liliana back?" "yes. let's do what we normally do." "k."
"Hello?hi mom!i'm home."aww.my little baby!"
"LILIANA!"We both cried. "liliana....Carson and i are going to be getting married." *gasp!* "do you not want us to?" "i do!Then you can be my real sister!*shriek!*We are so awsome. "carson...she loves the idea!" "good. because we need to make it to tomorrow." "why?! i have somewhere to go." "oh.ok. Liliana,can you help me with the dress?" "already on it."
*tomorrow*


"do you take this beloved woman to be your wife?" "I do." "And Alice,do you take this beloved man to be your husband?" "i do." "you may now kiss the bride."
"yay!" "congrats. alice."Thanks Liliana" your welcome."

end of chap.20 please comment!

heads up...again.

Hey everyone!im the author and i want to tell you all that just when you think this story is going to end...it doesnt.so.....BE PREPARED!!!!

thank you.

-AUTHOR

chap.19 name=Death?

Alices' P.O.V.

"mehertfulaugh!"and a sheild appered arround me.
then i quickly used the kill spell an Malehindra and he died.
carson got out of his cage and we just had to.....

we were finaly ok.bt then i cried."what's the matter alice?You don't have to worry anymore!he's dead!" Then this happened....


Hello Alice.we miss you a lot.and we could only see you when you become worthy.you are now worthy.
"yah.but what about Liliana?"

"alice.you will find Liliana by just doing what you normally do..only without her... and she will come to you.I promise.And I've never done anything to harm you.only to protect you.Trust me.We love you Alice.Now Listen to what we said,and we promise that good things will happen.

end of chap. 19! please comment!

chap.18

Alices' P.O.V.

How could you kill liliana?

*flashbacks*
just her
when we were young

the both of us



her at school

her when she was sad...and i made her happy...

even when we were really young

i will still always lover her like a sister.

"ALICE LOOK OUT!" "what? OH MY GOSH!!

end of chap.18!please comment

chap.17

Alices' P.O.V.

"oh lambaraba"i got free of the cage that Malehindra put me in.
Then almost right after that,this is what Malehindra did to me....look at my ears.

i had enough time to pull out a sword....

"Liliana..be prepared to die." "NO LILIANA!" but it was too late.lucky me that was the fake one.But now i have to find the real Liliana.But i remember that Liliana gave me one tip...never cry in a battle.it only distracts you.i listened to what she said.and it worked.But then malehindra pulled out this evil sword that was purple.i quickly used magic to swap our swords.....this is what i looked then....

I was so mad.
"YOU KILLED LILIANA!" "Yes i did." "HOW CAN YOU BE SO CALM WHEN I'M ABOUT TO KILL YOU?!?!?!" "Because." "AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!"sticking at him but then he put me in a cage.It startd to slowly suck out all of my wizards powers,including mine....

end of chap.17! so sad and intresting huh?! please comment!

chap.16

Alices' P.O.V.

"Nice going Liliana!" "sorry!i just thought that i could take a little breath and it's not my fault i tripped over a wire!" *sigh* "ok Liliana.just follow my lead." "ok"


Malehindras' P.O.V.

"Carson...be prepared to be let go...." "whatever."
"they are here........."

Alices' P.O.V.

"CARSON!!!" "NO ALICE DON'T!!!!!" "MWAHAHAHAHA!I GOT YOU NOW ALICE!"
"AAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!" "LEAVE ALICE ALONE!" "Liliana...don't" "ahh.so your best friend came along too?well...she now knows where where the castle is...so...
she shall DIE!" "NOOOOO LILIANA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

end of chap.16 yes.it gets worse.MWAHAHAHAHA!!!!!please comment!

chap.15

Alices' P.O.V.

"Ugh.Liliana i'm SO THIRSTY!!" "Well...then use your spell book"
"ok.It says..... la ma ba ok on no" ******WATER!******"HEY LILIANA!WATER APPEARED IN THIN AIR!" "No duh.That's why it's Magic." "oh.ok.Well i knew that...it's just....exciting.' "whatever." *sigh* "Alice....let set camp.It's getting dark and plus we've walked now 35 mieles." "so tiered." "good-night Alice"
"good-night"

*Don't worry Carson.We are almost there*



Malehindras' P.O.V.

"Well Carson?Where are your pretty little friend?" "getting closer to killing you." "You know,I'm going to let you go when Alice gets here." "And why is that?" "Because i'm going to put ALICE in the trap!Only a lot worse trap...." "Aand what is that?" "i'm not telling you stupid boy!"

Natilies' P.O.V.(Liliana and Carsons' mom)

"Oh my gosh.What have i done?!?!I swore to the queen that i wouldn't let alice out of my hands!"(starts crying REALLY HHARD)This is terrible!Oh what should i do????Maybe just kill myself.........."

*morning*


Alices' P.O.V.


"Liliana.....Wake up." "huh" "Oh.Alice....sorry." "ok"
"Liliana we have to go!We want to get there as soon as possible!"
"I know!I know." "Then hurry up!" "OK im trying to!We just need to pack everything up." "to olabungu" ****CLEAN!****
"WOW" "oh it's just magic Liliana" "ok ok.I'm sorry about that." "yeah. Lets get going."

"O.M.G.!!!!!" "WHAT?!?!"
"I SEE THE MOUNTAIN!" "WHERE ALICE?!?!WHERE?!"
"You don't see it?It's just a little longer." "But it's night."
"You do have a point lil' ok. We'll get up first thing in the morning."
"ok good-night" "good night"

*early morning*

"Liliana,get up we are SOooo close!"
"ok.i'm coming what about breakfast?" "Already made.I let you sleep in"
"oh.ok. OH WOW." "what?Is there something wrong with it?" "NO!IT'S SUPER GOOD!" "oh.well..thank-you." "we should get going now." "yes.yes we should."


Malehindras' P.O.V.

"Carson...it looks like your little friend and sister is here.
For they have sounded the alarm........


end of chap.15!i know it's long.~_~ please comment!^_^

Monday, June 21, 2010

heads up in my stories..

Hey....um...when ever from now on....when ever there is a number like 20 or 25...
so if it ends in a 0 or a 5,then my chap. will be longer.Because i calculated and figured out that most of them are like that.so........i hope you have your memory hats on...because ill be doing that with ALL of my stories.starting at chap.10 though.
thank-you!
-AUTHOR

Chap.14

Carsons' P.O.V.



*I miss Alice.a lot.*


i remember that.Common' alice...i know your trying your best to just....come and save me....but....it's not worth risking your life for my terrible one.



i love you.and care about you.i'm not worth it.

Alices' P.O.V.


(meditaing)
O.M.G.
"Liliana!Carson needs our help!And now!!!!
I'm sorry Natilie...but i have to take your daughter with me to save carson and the world.thank-you for all of what you've done!bye!"

"ok,but take care Alice." "i will! thank-you so much.you are like a mom to me."
"go have an adventure." Liliana pulls out a weapon...."oh.we will...."

end of chap14 !i cant wait 4 the next one!comment! ^_^

webshow hold...

~We havent been posting lately cuz of We all of Busy Schudules on Summer Vacation, Yeah I know what You're Thinking, Stuff? On Summer Vacation? Dont You just Eat, Sleep, and Watch? Haha, No..We're Not those kind of People. So Please hang Tight, We're trying to fit a webshow time.;) Also Mike'n Ike's B-day Party is this Friday, So we MIGHT Do an episode there. So hang Tight! We'll get our webshow done soon!~
~Yummy Bad-Boy Gummy Bears~
~Lily/Bananas/Kylie From The Bananasandwizards Crew

chap.13

Alices' P.O.V.
"I have to do MORE running?!" "yes." "But i've already run 20 mieles!!!"
"Girl.if you want to save the world and Carson...you should really learn to work out." "but----" "ugh.just do as i say." "fine."
i continue doing all of this weight lifting,and doing LOTS of gymnastics like flips to dodge Malehindras' evil spells.but the one thing that keeps my spirits high is Carson.I know he's waiting for me...and probably trying to read my mind-----
"O.M.G.!LILIANA!I KNOW WHAT I HAVE TO DO!" "WHAT?!?!?!" "It will help me become stonger." "THEN WHAT IS IT GIRL?!?!SPIT IT OUT!" "Meditate." "oh.duh.your only saying that because that's something carson would have-----" "what Carson would have said.i know.And that's why i'm going to do it.Just....listen to me for a change."
"Alice....if i hurt your feel-----" "yes you hurt my feelings and....yes.i am very sad now.i just want to be left alone.i just miss his so much.









me now.

Me in real life...



i remember seeing my mom as a kid in a pic.


but.....Carson is on my mind and always will be....Carson..if you here me....
i love and miss you.don't worry.we are on our way.....

end of chap.13!!!!please comment!