I am so sorry for taking forever to write...
Ive just been so busy lately and idk.im going to wrtie in a little.
I know everything...just so busy.I will write as much as possible.
Thank-you!dont forget to read.
Monday, June 28, 2010
so sorry
I am so sorry for taking forever to write...
Ive just been so busy lately and idk.im going to wrtie in a little.
I know everything...just so busy.I will write as much as possible.
Thank-you!dont forget to read.
Tuesday, June 22, 2010
chap.22
alices' P.O.V.
"What is your name?" "thank-you for asking but my name origanally
was Marry then when i got married to Max,aka malehindra,i changed it to
Maranda." "hey.i think that's a pretty name." "which one?" "both.But i like
Maranda" "oh.um....thank you." "but i'm not here for distruction."(relef went through the room) "But my son and daughter is." *gasp!* everywhere. "i just came here for the wedding." "You arn't as bad i expected an evil villan to be..." "Well that's because i'm not really evil.He locked me because of my beauty and wanted to marry me.We had two kids and their names are Tanner and Lily.And their names now are Ticometer and Lestorcamabooet.But....they take after their father...at least...they used to....i started to teach the kids about just how bad their father was so i had to change their minds.not litarally..but...like....oh nevermind." "ok. Well...time for the party for all of us!" "Yup" "O.M.G.!Liliana.you scared me." "oh.sorry."
*having a great time*
"mom?" "yes dear?" "dad is calling from the dead."
"OH MY GOSH!" "What's the matter Maranda?!" "my husband is still trying to kill you."
*gasp* "how?!" "from the dead world.They have an extra life!and he's trying to kill you with that extra life.You should like get the heck out of here."
end of chap.22! please comment!
"What is your name?" "thank-you for asking but my name origanally
was Marry then when i got married to Max,aka malehindra,i changed it to
Maranda." "hey.i think that's a pretty name." "which one?" "both.But i like
Maranda" "oh.um....thank you." "but i'm not here for distruction."(relef went through the room) "But my son and daughter is." *gasp!* everywhere. "i just came here for the wedding." "You arn't as bad i expected an evil villan to be..." "Well that's because i'm not really evil.He locked me because of my beauty and wanted to marry me.We had two kids and their names are Tanner and Lily.And their names now are Ticometer and Lestorcamabooet.But....they take after their father...at least...they used to....i started to teach the kids about just how bad their father was so i had to change their minds.not litarally..but...like....oh nevermind." "ok. Well...time for the party for all of us!" "Yup" "O.M.G.!Liliana.you scared me." "oh.sorry."
*having a great time*
"mom?" "yes dear?" "dad is calling from the dead."
"OH MY GOSH!" "What's the matter Maranda?!" "my husband is still trying to kill you."
*gasp* "how?!" "from the dead world.They have an extra life!and he's trying to kill you with that extra life.You should like get the heck out of here."
end of chap.22! please comment!
chap.21
Alices' P.O.V.
Well everything was going fine until Carson and i found out
That Liliana has had a boyfriend like just a little while ago.
She showed us some pics. for proof......
When she was 15...
When she found out she had to risk her life for mine...
We were kinda mad when we found out.But who cares!They're getting married in a couple of hours.And we were first on the list.And by the way,we just barely found out that his name was Conner.
"Connor,do you take this beloved woman to be your wife?" "I do" "Liliana,do your take this beloved man to be your husband?" "I do" "you may kiss the bride"
And then after they kissed,Malehindras' wife came in......
"oh.Maybe i should do a more...lievely color....
"Much better.And now for the good part....."
end of chap.21!Like i said.it doesn't end when you think it does.please comment!
Well everything was going fine until Carson and i found out
That Liliana has had a boyfriend like just a little while ago.
She showed us some pics. for proof......
When she was 15...
When she found out she had to risk her life for mine...We were kinda mad when we found out.But who cares!They're getting married in a couple of hours.And we were first on the list.And by the way,we just barely found out that his name was Conner.
"Connor,do you take this beloved woman to be your wife?" "I do" "Liliana,do your take this beloved man to be your husband?" "I do" "you may kiss the bride"
And then after they kissed,Malehindras' wife came in......
"oh.Maybe i should do a more...lievely color....
"Much better.And now for the good part....."
end of chap.21!Like i said.it doesn't end when you think it does.please comment!
Chap.20
Alices' P.O.V.
"I like how we can just telepot back to your house." "same here."
"remember our first kiss?" "yes.or that one time after prom?"
"yes....or....
When the family went on a cruise?and we got to share?insead of Me and Liliana?" "yes. now....Alice....I love you." "i love you too." "Alice....all we have to do is wait 1 more year." "yep.i can't wait.but first can we PLEASE just get Liliana back?" "yes. let's do what we normally do." "k."
"Hello?hi mom!i'm home."aww.my little baby!"
"LILIANA!"We both cried. "liliana....Carson and i are going to be getting married." *gasp!* "do you not want us to?" "i do!Then you can be my real sister!*shriek!*We are so awsome. "carson...she loves the idea!" "good. because we need to make it to tomorrow." "why?! i have somewhere to go." "oh.ok. Liliana,can you help me with the dress?" "already on it."
*tomorrow*
"do you take this beloved woman to be your wife?" "I do." "And Alice,do you take this beloved man to be your husband?" "i do." "you may now kiss the bride."
"yay!" "congrats. alice."Thanks Liliana" your welcome."
end of chap.20 please comment!
"I like how we can just telepot back to your house." "same here."
"remember our first kiss?" "yes.or that one time after prom?"
"yes....or....
When the family went on a cruise?and we got to share?insead of Me and Liliana?" "yes. now....Alice....I love you." "i love you too." "Alice....all we have to do is wait 1 more year." "yep.i can't wait.but first can we PLEASE just get Liliana back?" "yes. let's do what we normally do." "k."
"Hello?hi mom!i'm home."aww.my little baby!"
"LILIANA!"We both cried. "liliana....Carson and i are going to be getting married." *gasp!* "do you not want us to?" "i do!Then you can be my real sister!*shriek!*We are so awsome. "carson...she loves the idea!" "good. because we need to make it to tomorrow." "why?! i have somewhere to go." "oh.ok. Liliana,can you help me with the dress?" "already on it."
*tomorrow*
"do you take this beloved woman to be your wife?" "I do." "And Alice,do you take this beloved man to be your husband?" "i do." "you may now kiss the bride."
"yay!" "congrats. alice."Thanks Liliana" your welcome."
end of chap.20 please comment!
heads up...again.
Hey everyone!im the author and i want to tell you all that just when you think this story is going to end...it doesnt.so.....BE PREPARED!!!!
thank you.
-AUTHOR
thank you.
-AUTHOR
chap.19 name=Death?
Alices' P.O.V.
"mehertfulaugh!"and a sheild appered arround me.
then i quickly used the kill spell an Malehindra and he died.
carson got out of his cage and we just had to.....
we were finaly ok.bt then i cried."what's the matter alice?You don't have to worry anymore!he's dead!" Then this happened....
Hello Alice.we miss you a lot.and we could only see you when you become worthy.you are now worthy.
"yah.but what about Liliana?"
"alice.you will find Liliana by just doing what you normally do..only without her... and she will come to you.I promise.And I've never done anything to harm you.only to protect you.Trust me.We love you Alice.Now Listen to what we said,and we promise that good things will happen.
end of chap. 19! please comment!
"mehertfulaugh!"and a sheild appered arround me.
then i quickly used the kill spell an Malehindra and he died.
carson got out of his cage and we just had to.....
we were finaly ok.bt then i cried."what's the matter alice?You don't have to worry anymore!he's dead!" Then this happened....
Hello Alice.we miss you a lot.and we could only see you when you become worthy.you are now worthy.
"yah.but what about Liliana?"
"alice.you will find Liliana by just doing what you normally do..only without her... and she will come to you.I promise.And I've never done anything to harm you.only to protect you.Trust me.We love you Alice.Now Listen to what we said,and we promise that good things will happen.
end of chap. 19! please comment!
chap.18
Alices' P.O.V.
How could you kill liliana?
*flashbacks*
just her
when we were young
the both of us
her at school
her when she was sad...and i made her happy...
even when we were really young
i will still always lover her like a sister.
"ALICE LOOK OUT!" "what? OH MY GOSH!!
end of chap.18!please comment
How could you kill liliana?
*flashbacks*
just herwhen we were young
the both of us
her at school
her when she was sad...and i made her happy...
even when we were really young
i will still always lover her like a sister.
"ALICE LOOK OUT!" "what? OH MY GOSH!!
end of chap.18!please comment
chap.17
Alices' P.O.V.
"oh lambaraba"i got free of the cage that Malehindra put me in.
Then almost right after that,this is what Malehindra did to me....look at my ears.
i had enough time to pull out a sword....
"Liliana..be prepared to die." "NO LILIANA!" but it was too late.lucky me that was the fake one.But now i have to find the real Liliana.But i remember that Liliana gave me one tip...never cry in a battle.it only distracts you.i listened to what she said.and it worked.But then malehindra pulled out this evil sword that was purple.i quickly used magic to swap our swords.....this is what i looked then....
I was so mad.
"YOU KILLED LILIANA!" "Yes i did." "HOW CAN YOU BE SO CALM WHEN I'M ABOUT TO KILL YOU?!?!?!" "Because." "AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!"sticking at him but then he put me in a cage.It startd to slowly suck out all of my wizards powers,including mine....
end of chap.17! so sad and intresting huh?! please comment!
"oh lambaraba"i got free of the cage that Malehindra put me in.
Then almost right after that,this is what Malehindra did to me....look at my ears.
i had enough time to pull out a sword....
"Liliana..be prepared to die." "NO LILIANA!" but it was too late.lucky me that was the fake one.But now i have to find the real Liliana.But i remember that Liliana gave me one tip...never cry in a battle.it only distracts you.i listened to what she said.and it worked.But then malehindra pulled out this evil sword that was purple.i quickly used magic to swap our swords.....this is what i looked then....
I was so mad.
"YOU KILLED LILIANA!" "Yes i did." "HOW CAN YOU BE SO CALM WHEN I'M ABOUT TO KILL YOU?!?!?!" "Because." "AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!"sticking at him but then he put me in a cage.It startd to slowly suck out all of my wizards powers,including mine....
end of chap.17! so sad and intresting huh?! please comment!
chap.16
Alices' P.O.V.
"Nice going Liliana!" "sorry!i just thought that i could take a little breath and it's not my fault i tripped over a wire!" *sigh* "ok Liliana.just follow my lead." "ok"
Malehindras' P.O.V.
"Carson...be prepared to be let go...." "whatever."
"they are here........."
Alices' P.O.V.
"CARSON!!!" "NO ALICE DON'T!!!!!" "MWAHAHAHAHA!I GOT YOU NOW ALICE!"
"AAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!" "LEAVE ALICE ALONE!" "Liliana...don't" "ahh.so your best friend came along too?well...she now knows where where the castle is...so...
she shall DIE!" "NOOOOO LILIANA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
end of chap.16 yes.it gets worse.MWAHAHAHAHA!!!!!please comment!
"Nice going Liliana!" "sorry!i just thought that i could take a little breath and it's not my fault i tripped over a wire!" *sigh* "ok Liliana.just follow my lead." "ok"
Malehindras' P.O.V.
"Carson...be prepared to be let go...." "whatever."
"they are here........."
Alices' P.O.V.
"CARSON!!!" "NO ALICE DON'T!!!!!" "MWAHAHAHAHA!I GOT YOU NOW ALICE!"
"AAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!" "LEAVE ALICE ALONE!" "Liliana...don't" "ahh.so your best friend came along too?well...she now knows where where the castle is...so...
she shall DIE!" "NOOOOO LILIANA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
end of chap.16 yes.it gets worse.MWAHAHAHAHA!!!!!please comment!
chap.15
Alices' P.O.V.
"Ugh.Liliana i'm SO THIRSTY!!" "Well...then use your spell book"
"ok.It says..... la ma ba ok on no" ******WATER!******"HEY LILIANA!WATER APPEARED IN THIN AIR!" "No duh.That's why it's Magic." "oh.ok.Well i knew that...it's just....exciting.' "whatever." *sigh* "Alice....let set camp.It's getting dark and plus we've walked now 35 mieles." "so tiered." "good-night Alice"
"good-night"
*Don't worry Carson.We are almost there*
Malehindras' P.O.V.
"Well Carson?Where are your pretty little friend?" "getting closer to killing you." "You know,I'm going to let you go when Alice gets here." "And why is that?" "Because i'm going to put ALICE in the trap!Only a lot worse trap...." "Aand what is that?" "i'm not telling you stupid boy!"
Natilies' P.O.V.(Liliana and Carsons' mom)
"Oh my gosh.What have i done?!?!I swore to the queen that i wouldn't let alice out of my hands!"(starts crying REALLY HHARD)This is terrible!Oh what should i do????Maybe just kill myself.........."
*morning*
Alices' P.O.V.
"Liliana.....Wake up." "huh" "Oh.Alice....sorry." "ok"
"Liliana we have to go!We want to get there as soon as possible!"
"I know!I know." "Then hurry up!" "OK im trying to!We just need to pack everything up." "to olabungu" ****CLEAN!****
"WOW" "oh it's just magic Liliana" "ok ok.I'm sorry about that." "yeah. Lets get going."
"O.M.G.!!!!!" "WHAT?!?!"
"I SEE THE MOUNTAIN!" "WHERE ALICE?!?!WHERE?!"
"You don't see it?It's just a little longer." "But it's night."
"You do have a point lil' ok. We'll get up first thing in the morning."
"ok good-night" "good night"
*early morning*
"Liliana,get up we are SOooo close!"
"ok.i'm coming what about breakfast?" "Already made.I let you sleep in"
"oh.ok. OH WOW." "what?Is there something wrong with it?" "NO!IT'S SUPER GOOD!" "oh.well..thank-you." "we should get going now." "yes.yes we should."
Malehindras' P.O.V.
"Carson...it looks like your little friend and sister is here.
For they have sounded the alarm........
end of chap.15!i know it's long.~_~ please comment!^_^
"Ugh.Liliana i'm SO THIRSTY!!" "Well...then use your spell book"
"ok.It says..... la ma ba ok on no" ******WATER!******"HEY LILIANA!WATER APPEARED IN THIN AIR!" "No duh.That's why it's Magic." "oh.ok.Well i knew that...it's just....exciting.' "whatever." *sigh* "Alice....let set camp.It's getting dark and plus we've walked now 35 mieles." "so tiered." "good-night Alice"
"good-night"
*Don't worry Carson.We are almost there*
Malehindras' P.O.V.
"Well Carson?Where are your pretty little friend?" "getting closer to killing you." "You know,I'm going to let you go when Alice gets here." "And why is that?" "Because i'm going to put ALICE in the trap!Only a lot worse trap...." "Aand what is that?" "i'm not telling you stupid boy!"
Natilies' P.O.V.(Liliana and Carsons' mom)
"Oh my gosh.What have i done?!?!I swore to the queen that i wouldn't let alice out of my hands!"(starts crying REALLY HHARD)This is terrible!Oh what should i do????Maybe just kill myself.........."
*morning*
Alices' P.O.V.
"Liliana.....Wake up." "huh" "Oh.Alice....sorry." "ok"
"Liliana we have to go!We want to get there as soon as possible!"
"I know!I know." "Then hurry up!" "OK im trying to!We just need to pack everything up." "to olabungu" ****CLEAN!****
"WOW" "oh it's just magic Liliana" "ok ok.I'm sorry about that." "yeah. Lets get going."
"O.M.G.!!!!!" "WHAT?!?!"
"I SEE THE MOUNTAIN!" "WHERE ALICE?!?!WHERE?!"
"You don't see it?It's just a little longer." "But it's night."
"You do have a point lil' ok. We'll get up first thing in the morning."
"ok good-night" "good night"
*early morning*
"Liliana,get up we are SOooo close!"
"ok.i'm coming what about breakfast?" "Already made.I let you sleep in"
"oh.ok. OH WOW." "what?Is there something wrong with it?" "NO!IT'S SUPER GOOD!" "oh.well..thank-you." "we should get going now." "yes.yes we should."
Malehindras' P.O.V.
"Carson...it looks like your little friend and sister is here.
For they have sounded the alarm........
end of chap.15!i know it's long.~_~ please comment!^_^
Monday, June 21, 2010
heads up in my stories..
Hey....um...when ever from now on....when ever there is a number like 20 or 25...
so if it ends in a 0 or a 5,then my chap. will be longer.Because i calculated and figured out that most of them are like that.so........i hope you have your memory hats on...because ill be doing that with ALL of my stories.starting at chap.10 though.
thank-you!
-AUTHOR
so if it ends in a 0 or a 5,then my chap. will be longer.Because i calculated and figured out that most of them are like that.so........i hope you have your memory hats on...because ill be doing that with ALL of my stories.starting at chap.10 though.
thank-you!
-AUTHOR
Chap.14
Carsons' P.O.V.
*I miss Alice.a lot.*
i remember that.Common' alice...i know your trying your best to just....come and save me....but....it's not worth risking your life for my terrible one.
i love you.and care about you.i'm not worth it.
Alices' P.O.V.
(meditaing)
O.M.G.
"Liliana!Carson needs our help!And now!!!!
I'm sorry Natilie...but i have to take your daughter with me to save carson and the world.thank-you for all of what you've done!bye!"
"ok,but take care Alice." "i will! thank-you so much.you are like a mom to me."
"go have an adventure." Liliana pulls out a weapon...."oh.we will...."
end of chap14 !i cant wait 4 the next one!comment! ^_^
*I miss Alice.a lot.*
i remember that.Common' alice...i know your trying your best to just....come and save me....but....it's not worth risking your life for my terrible one.
i love you.and care about you.i'm not worth it.
Alices' P.O.V.
(meditaing)
O.M.G.
"Liliana!Carson needs our help!And now!!!!
I'm sorry Natilie...but i have to take your daughter with me to save carson and the world.thank-you for all of what you've done!bye!"
"ok,but take care Alice." "i will! thank-you so much.you are like a mom to me."
"go have an adventure." Liliana pulls out a weapon...."oh.we will...."
end of chap14 !i cant wait 4 the next one!comment! ^_^
webshow hold...
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chap.13
Alices' P.O.V.
"I have to do MORE running?!" "yes." "But i've already run 20 mieles!!!"
"Girl.if you want to save the world and Carson...you should really learn to work out." "but----" "ugh.just do as i say." "fine."
i continue doing all of this weight lifting,and doing LOTS of gymnastics like flips to dodge Malehindras' evil spells.but the one thing that keeps my spirits high is Carson.I know he's waiting for me...and probably trying to read my mind-----
"O.M.G.!LILIANA!I KNOW WHAT I HAVE TO DO!" "WHAT?!?!?!" "It will help me become stonger." "THEN WHAT IS IT GIRL?!?!SPIT IT OUT!" "Meditate." "oh.duh.your only saying that because that's something carson would have-----" "what Carson would have said.i know.And that's why i'm going to do it.Just....listen to me for a change."
"Alice....if i hurt your feel-----" "yes you hurt my feelings and....yes.i am very sad now.i just want to be left alone.i just miss his so much.
me now.
Me in real life...
i remember seeing my mom as a kid in a pic.
but.....Carson is on my mind and always will be....Carson..if you here me....
i love and miss you.don't worry.we are on our way.....
end of chap.13!!!!please comment!
"I have to do MORE running?!" "yes." "But i've already run 20 mieles!!!"
"Girl.if you want to save the world and Carson...you should really learn to work out." "but----" "ugh.just do as i say." "fine."
i continue doing all of this weight lifting,and doing LOTS of gymnastics like flips to dodge Malehindras' evil spells.but the one thing that keeps my spirits high is Carson.I know he's waiting for me...and probably trying to read my mind-----
"O.M.G.!LILIANA!I KNOW WHAT I HAVE TO DO!" "WHAT?!?!?!" "It will help me become stonger." "THEN WHAT IS IT GIRL?!?!SPIT IT OUT!" "Meditate." "oh.duh.your only saying that because that's something carson would have-----" "what Carson would have said.i know.And that's why i'm going to do it.Just....listen to me for a change."
"Alice....if i hurt your feel-----" "yes you hurt my feelings and....yes.i am very sad now.i just want to be left alone.i just miss his so much.
me now.
Me in real life...
i remember seeing my mom as a kid in a pic.
but.....Carson is on my mind and always will be....Carson..if you here me....
i love and miss you.don't worry.we are on our way.....
end of chap.13!!!!please comment!
chap.12 name=training
Alices' P.O.V.
"I have to train to fight him?" "yes Alice for the millionth time.You are a wizard.....and now you need to learn the proper spells." "but...when i was a baby i knew the spells...right?" "Um...yes.the baby spells....but they are VERY powerful."
"ok...well...where do i start?" "You start by reading this book"(giving me a 1ft thick book. "I have to read ALL of this?!" "yes.and in less than a week.maybe 3 days." "Is that even possible?!" "yes.I know you Alice.and i know that you are a very highly inteligent girl,who can also read fast.ok?i'm conting on you.And so is Carson."
**falshback**
and yes.i was young...but i remember.
"Alice......ALICE!!" "huh?what?oh.sorry.i...dozed out.
end of chap.12!i like the pics. please comment!!^_^
"I have to train to fight him?" "yes Alice for the millionth time.You are a wizard.....and now you need to learn the proper spells." "but...when i was a baby i knew the spells...right?" "Um...yes.the baby spells....but they are VERY powerful."
"ok...well...where do i start?" "You start by reading this book"(giving me a 1ft thick book. "I have to read ALL of this?!" "yes.and in less than a week.maybe 3 days." "Is that even possible?!" "yes.I know you Alice.and i know that you are a very highly inteligent girl,who can also read fast.ok?i'm conting on you.And so is Carson."
**falshback**
and yes.i was young...but i remember.
"Alice......ALICE!!" "huh?what?oh.sorry.i...dozed out.
end of chap.12!i like the pics. please comment!!^_^
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