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Monday, June 21, 2010
chap.11
Alices' P.O.V.
"well...sure Carson.you've always been a good friend to me...and..so..i guess." "ok then." "hahaha" "we will fight till the end together.no matter who or what tries to seperate us." "your so cute Carson." "thank-you.its seems only yesterday when i met you." "same here."
(back in present time)
"In The Hall Of The Mountain King" "what?" "thats what it is.He's King of the Mountains." "ok.Alice you are starting to not make any----" "Liliana,i think i would know by now.i know that he is.i remember playing there.that's why his solders are made up of ice.Everything is finaly revealinlg its self!" "No.You are revealing them." "Liliana,i know that your a really good friend of mine...but...i can't let you die.You are my best friend." "ok.i might be...but no.I won't let you go alone.even if you want to save your boyfried alone.You know...he's MY brother!"
"yah well he's MY boyfriend!" *sigh* "im sorry Liliana.I just....I can't see anymore pointless deaths." "And you won't!They won't be pointless by seeing the man who killed your parents die!" "ok but...ugh.nevermind.i guess you just dont understand me."
Malehindra P.O.V.
"Carson,where is your team?i would of expected them by now!"
"they will be here in less than a week."
End of chap.11!i know.its kinda short...~_~but kind of intresting!!!!comment!^_^
"well...sure Carson.you've always been a good friend to me...and..so..i guess." "ok then." "hahaha" "we will fight till the end together.no matter who or what tries to seperate us." "your so cute Carson." "thank-you.its seems only yesterday when i met you." "same here."
(back in present time)
"In The Hall Of The Mountain King" "what?" "thats what it is.He's King of the Mountains." "ok.Alice you are starting to not make any----" "Liliana,i think i would know by now.i know that he is.i remember playing there.that's why his solders are made up of ice.Everything is finaly revealinlg its self!" "No.You are revealing them." "Liliana,i know that your a really good friend of mine...but...i can't let you die.You are my best friend." "ok.i might be...but no.I won't let you go alone.even if you want to save your boyfried alone.You know...he's MY brother!"
"yah well he's MY boyfriend!" *sigh* "im sorry Liliana.I just....I can't see anymore pointless deaths." "And you won't!They won't be pointless by seeing the man who killed your parents die!" "ok but...ugh.nevermind.i guess you just dont understand me."
Malehindra P.O.V.
"Carson,where is your team?i would of expected them by now!"
"they will be here in less than a week."
End of chap.11!i know.its kinda short...~_~but kind of intresting!!!!comment!^_^
chap.10 name=the first defeat
(BACK IN TIME....)
(Alices' MOMS' P.O.V.)
"NO MAX!THIS BABY CANT HURT YOU!SHE IS JUST A BABY!" "No...she is much more than that.she is a princess and we cant have any new rulers ehh?so that means that you must die TONIGHT!" "NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
(Alice does this...) "hahaha hahahaha hahaha ra ma la op poo no on um mum....
(and just then was when sparkeles appeared.)"AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!
(Max flew back)
*gasp* "Alice!how did you do that?!" *laughs* "well....you are your mother and fathers baby. isnt that right my little princess." "well now that Max is gone,and plans on killing us....we must have war..." "war is not the only answer...maybe he's just loneley.we should visit him.but lets leave our baby with Lilianas' and Carsons' parents." "that would be good dear" "ok.hello?carson!you scared me." "ah ga ma" "ok. hello my queen" "oh no need for that.i need you to do me a big favor and keep this baby well hidden from Max." "ok my queen" "here is some money for her,and your family." "WOW.how much is in here?!" "9 billion dollars. now dont show it off.we dont want anyone to know that she lives here." "ok.well.good-bye!" "bye.and thank-you so much." "my pleasure" "good bye my little princess!" "ah ah poo" "your kids are too young to remember all of this right?" "yes." "ok.bye!"
(entering his palace again.)
"GAURDS!BRING THEM TO ME!!!!!!!" "um...this is a nice place...i guess" "why have you come?" "we wanted to visit you." "where is your baby?" "in a hidding place."
"why?" "from you trying to kill her!" "but why?" "we refuse to tell you." "fine.then...YOU WILL BE MURDERED TONIGHT!" "AAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!"
and that was the end for the king and queen protecting their loved one.
Carsons' P.O.V. @ the age of 14 yrs. old
*thinking....*Alice is so beautiful.she's the prettest person i've seen alive."CARSON!" "oh.sorry mom.what?" " i said to go wake alice and your sister Lilinana up!" "ok." "Alice....wake up...." "huh?oh.it's you Carson.Youknow...your really cute." "as much as you are pretty?" "oh no...ok." "i have to go wake Liliana up.....um....maybe we can get together later...." "oh.ok. *laughing*" "maybe...dinner?" "ok."
"LILIANA!GET UP!"(shaking her wileldly.) "ok!im up!im up!"
Now Carson is 17 while Alice is 16
"this is really nice." "yah." "ok"
"Alice....will you be my new girlfriend?"
end of chap.10!!!!!i <3 this 1! please comment!^_^
(Alices' MOMS' P.O.V.)
"NO MAX!THIS BABY CANT HURT YOU!SHE IS JUST A BABY!" "No...she is much more than that.she is a princess and we cant have any new rulers ehh?so that means that you must die TONIGHT!" "NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
(Alice does this...) "hahaha hahahaha hahaha ra ma la op poo no on um mum....
(and just then was when sparkeles appeared.)"AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!
(Max flew back)
*gasp* "Alice!how did you do that?!" *laughs* "well....you are your mother and fathers baby. isnt that right my little princess." "well now that Max is gone,and plans on killing us....we must have war..." "war is not the only answer...maybe he's just loneley.we should visit him.but lets leave our baby with Lilianas' and Carsons' parents." "that would be good dear" "ok.hello?carson!you scared me." "ah ga ma" "ok. hello my queen" "oh no need for that.i need you to do me a big favor and keep this baby well hidden from Max." "ok my queen" "here is some money for her,and your family." "WOW.how much is in here?!" "9 billion dollars. now dont show it off.we dont want anyone to know that she lives here." "ok.well.good-bye!" "bye.and thank-you so much." "my pleasure" "good bye my little princess!" "ah ah poo" "your kids are too young to remember all of this right?" "yes." "ok.bye!"
(entering his palace again.)
"GAURDS!BRING THEM TO ME!!!!!!!" "um...this is a nice place...i guess" "why have you come?" "we wanted to visit you." "where is your baby?" "in a hidding place."
"why?" "from you trying to kill her!" "but why?" "we refuse to tell you." "fine.then...YOU WILL BE MURDERED TONIGHT!" "AAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!"
and that was the end for the king and queen protecting their loved one.
Carsons' P.O.V. @ the age of 14 yrs. old
*thinking....*Alice is so beautiful.she's the prettest person i've seen alive."CARSON!" "oh.sorry mom.what?" " i said to go wake alice and your sister Lilinana up!" "ok." "Alice....wake up...." "huh?oh.it's you Carson.Youknow...your really cute." "as much as you are pretty?" "oh no...ok." "i have to go wake Liliana up.....um....maybe we can get together later...." "oh.ok. *laughing*" "maybe...dinner?" "ok."
"LILIANA!GET UP!"(shaking her wileldly.) "ok!im up!im up!"
Now Carson is 17 while Alice is 16
"this is really nice." "yah." "ok"
"Alice....will you be my new girlfriend?"
end of chap.10!!!!!i <3 this 1! please comment!^_^
chap.9
Malehindras' P.O.V.
"Hmmmmmm....Carson....so...what do you think of this Alice girl?"
"she's nice,sweet,caring,and CAN defeat you.And I'm going to help her." "And how exactly are you going to do that?" "You have no idea....."
Alices' P.O.V.
"Hey Lilinana!" "what?" "i just remembered something!" "but you didn't even go to sleep!" "i know....but it's something Carson taught me." "oh.ok.what is it?"
"he taught me how to meditate." "OMG!!!!!!!!" "WHAT?!?!?!?!" "HURRY UP AND DO THAT! SO THEN YOU CAN READ HIS MIND!!!!" "wait....carsons'? o---" "MALEHINDRAS'!!!! NOW HURRY AND DO WHAT CARSON TAUGHT YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
"ok!ok...just give me some time!" "WE DONT HAVE ANYTIME!CARSON MIGHT BE DEAD!"
(i start cying)
"aww im sorry Alice.i'm just really worried about him." "THEN HOW DO YOU THINK I FEEL?!?!I JUST FOUND OUT A TON OF THINGS,MY BOYFRIEND IS MISSING,AND MIGHT POSSIBLY BE DEAD,EVERYONE IN THE WORLD IS DEPENDING ON ME TO KILL MALEHINDRA,I JUST NOW FOUND OUT THAT I A PRINCESS,AND I WEAR SUPER UGLY CLOTHES!WHY CANT I JUST GO TO THE MALEHINDRAS' PALACE AND TAKE THE MONEY,AND THEN JUST START MY OWN PALACE?!?!?!?!?!"
"Well...the reason why you cant be in your palace....is because well....malehindra has servants that kill....that are made up of ice........"
"liliana...get your bags packed.I know where Max is........
end of chap.9!!!! please comment!^_^
"Hmmmmmm....Carson....so...what do you think of this Alice girl?"
"she's nice,sweet,caring,and CAN defeat you.And I'm going to help her." "And how exactly are you going to do that?" "You have no idea....."
Alices' P.O.V.
"Hey Lilinana!" "what?" "i just remembered something!" "but you didn't even go to sleep!" "i know....but it's something Carson taught me." "oh.ok.what is it?"
"he taught me how to meditate." "OMG!!!!!!!!" "WHAT?!?!?!?!" "HURRY UP AND DO THAT! SO THEN YOU CAN READ HIS MIND!!!!" "wait....carsons'? o---" "MALEHINDRAS'!!!! NOW HURRY AND DO WHAT CARSON TAUGHT YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
"ok!ok...just give me some time!" "WE DONT HAVE ANYTIME!CARSON MIGHT BE DEAD!"
(i start cying)
"aww im sorry Alice.i'm just really worried about him." "THEN HOW DO YOU THINK I FEEL?!?!I JUST FOUND OUT A TON OF THINGS,MY BOYFRIEND IS MISSING,AND MIGHT POSSIBLY BE DEAD,EVERYONE IN THE WORLD IS DEPENDING ON ME TO KILL MALEHINDRA,I JUST NOW FOUND OUT THAT I A PRINCESS,AND I WEAR SUPER UGLY CLOTHES!WHY CANT I JUST GO TO THE MALEHINDRAS' PALACE AND TAKE THE MONEY,AND THEN JUST START MY OWN PALACE?!?!?!?!?!"
"Well...the reason why you cant be in your palace....is because well....malehindra has servants that kill....that are made up of ice........"
"liliana...get your bags packed.I know where Max is........
end of chap.9!!!! please comment!^_^
Sunday, June 20, 2010
chap.8
Alices' P.O.V.
"Alice....you are not just any person,or any princess,you are the only one who can defeat malehindra.You have defeated him before...when you were only a baby.You saved your parents.They couldnt do anything.all anyone knows is that you are the speical one." "so....i have to save the plannet?" "not just the plannet....EVERYTHING depends on you." "ok....where do i start?" "you start by going to sleep to try to remember everything.....that may be hard....but you have to do it.
end of chap.i know that ts SUPER short...but....im writing a HUGE 1 in chap. 10 so im trying to find some ideas and finding out where to put all of it.~_~
PLEASE COMMENT!!!!!!!!!^_^
"Alice....you are not just any person,or any princess,you are the only one who can defeat malehindra.You have defeated him before...when you were only a baby.You saved your parents.They couldnt do anything.all anyone knows is that you are the speical one." "so....i have to save the plannet?" "not just the plannet....EVERYTHING depends on you." "ok....where do i start?" "you start by going to sleep to try to remember everything.....that may be hard....but you have to do it.
end of chap.i know that ts SUPER short...but....im writing a HUGE 1 in chap. 10 so im trying to find some ideas and finding out where to put all of it.~_~
PLEASE COMMENT!!!!!!!!!^_^
chap.7
Alices' P.O.V.
wait....so your telling me Liliana that I am the only one who knows where Malehindra lives?and where he keeps the dead?" "discustingly...but yes." "eww.But how do i knoww?" "when you were little....your parents were good friends with Malehindra....in fact that wasnt even his name to them.to them it was Max.Well..then your dad and "max" got in a fight...and well....your mom saved both of them." "then why am i so imprtant?" "let me finish....anyway....your parents were the king and queen.and because you went into hiding....Malehindra took the money and used part of it to use lots of these weird things.nobody knowes because the people who helped him had to die." "why?" "because he didnt want anyone to give away his position." "oh.ok..." "now please let me finish." "ok." "so well....he had to kill your parents in order to take the money.so....he had to do it.After he did....he knew that he couldnt be called Max anymore.instead....he named himself Malehindra.and so he continued to murder,and kidnap.He loved to do it.and he wants to kill you....because.....you arnt just any girl..or any princess.You are.....
to be continued.....in the next chapeter.......
end of chap.!PLEASE COMMENT!!!!!~_~ ^_^
wait....so your telling me Liliana that I am the only one who knows where Malehindra lives?and where he keeps the dead?" "discustingly...but yes." "eww.But how do i knoww?" "when you were little....your parents were good friends with Malehindra....in fact that wasnt even his name to them.to them it was Max.Well..then your dad and "max" got in a fight...and well....your mom saved both of them." "then why am i so imprtant?" "let me finish....anyway....your parents were the king and queen.and because you went into hiding....Malehindra took the money and used part of it to use lots of these weird things.nobody knowes because the people who helped him had to die." "why?" "because he didnt want anyone to give away his position." "oh.ok..." "now please let me finish." "ok." "so well....he had to kill your parents in order to take the money.so....he had to do it.After he did....he knew that he couldnt be called Max anymore.instead....he named himself Malehindra.and so he continued to murder,and kidnap.He loved to do it.and he wants to kill you....because.....you arnt just any girl..or any princess.You are.....
to be continued.....in the next chapeter.......
end of chap.!PLEASE COMMENT!!!!!~_~ ^_^
chap.6
malehindras' P.O.V.
"So Casrson....i know that the real you wants to go out with alice because of her beauty,bravery,and........" "and what" "why the he** would i tell you?"
"just thought that you would tell me..." "haha!you cant use mind tricks on anyone from the cell your in!" "ive noticed." "and that Alice is a cluts right now. there is no way she would be able to defeat me again!" "wait...she has defeated you before?" "yah.how didnt you know?" "im the REAL Carson."
Alices' P.O.V.
"Man.its SOoooo boring without carson here.Carson is nice,helpful,and sweet.
i miss him so much.But he seems so real....like he's the real one.....ugg.this is all so confusing.
if carson was here...he would help explain all of this to me a lot better.and it helps that he can read minds.
end of chap.6 please comment!!^_^
"So Casrson....i know that the real you wants to go out with alice because of her beauty,bravery,and........" "and what" "why the he** would i tell you?"
"just thought that you would tell me..." "haha!you cant use mind tricks on anyone from the cell your in!" "ive noticed." "and that Alice is a cluts right now. there is no way she would be able to defeat me again!" "wait...she has defeated you before?" "yah.how didnt you know?" "im the REAL Carson."
Alices' P.O.V.
"Man.its SOoooo boring without carson here.Carson is nice,helpful,and sweet.
i miss him so much.But he seems so real....like he's the real one.....ugg.this is all so confusing.
if carson was here...he would help explain all of this to me a lot better.and it helps that he can read minds.
end of chap.6 please comment!!^_^
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