Alices' P.O.V.
"OH MY GOSH!Were should i go Maranda?!" "i would choose somewhere wise.
nothing to obvious,but yet to.....easy." "what do you mean?" "im saying...... you should hide in his castle."*gasp* "WHAT?WHY?!" "he would never expect you to be there...since he killed your parents there."Tears shreded down my face. "im sorry alice...its just tha-----" "MARANDA!HOW COULD YOU SAY SOMETHING LIKE THAT TO ME?!?! YOU WERE IN THE ROOM WHEN THEY DIED!AND DIDNT EVEN TRY TO STOP YOUR HUSBAND!" "Alice!" "Let the man that killed my parents be gone along with the one and only evil wife that tries to kill me no----" "NO!" "AAHHHHH!WHY ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME?!?!omg that is the knife that malehindra used to kill my parents!" "yes.of course little girl.boy are you stupid." "AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!
end of chap.23 sorry.i cant print pics. on this computer.im on my grandpas. sorry its short!comment!
Monday, July 5, 2010
Monday, June 28, 2010
so sorry
I am so sorry for taking forever to write...
Ive just been so busy lately and idk.im going to wrtie in a little.
I know everything...just so busy.I will write as much as possible.
Thank-you!dont forget to read.
Tuesday, June 22, 2010
chap.22
alices' P.O.V.
"What is your name?" "thank-you for asking but my name origanally
was Marry then when i got married to Max,aka malehindra,i changed it to
Maranda." "hey.i think that's a pretty name." "which one?" "both.But i like
Maranda" "oh.um....thank you." "but i'm not here for distruction."(relef went through the room) "But my son and daughter is." *gasp!* everywhere. "i just came here for the wedding." "You arn't as bad i expected an evil villan to be..." "Well that's because i'm not really evil.He locked me because of my beauty and wanted to marry me.We had two kids and their names are Tanner and Lily.And their names now are Ticometer and Lestorcamabooet.But....they take after their father...at least...they used to....i started to teach the kids about just how bad their father was so i had to change their minds.not litarally..but...like....oh nevermind." "ok. Well...time for the party for all of us!" "Yup" "O.M.G.!Liliana.you scared me." "oh.sorry."
*having a great time*
"mom?" "yes dear?" "dad is calling from the dead."
"OH MY GOSH!" "What's the matter Maranda?!" "my husband is still trying to kill you."
*gasp* "how?!" "from the dead world.They have an extra life!and he's trying to kill you with that extra life.You should like get the heck out of here."
end of chap.22! please comment!
"What is your name?" "thank-you for asking but my name origanally
was Marry then when i got married to Max,aka malehindra,i changed it to
Maranda." "hey.i think that's a pretty name." "which one?" "both.But i like
Maranda" "oh.um....thank you." "but i'm not here for distruction."(relef went through the room) "But my son and daughter is." *gasp!* everywhere. "i just came here for the wedding." "You arn't as bad i expected an evil villan to be..." "Well that's because i'm not really evil.He locked me because of my beauty and wanted to marry me.We had two kids and their names are Tanner and Lily.And their names now are Ticometer and Lestorcamabooet.But....they take after their father...at least...they used to....i started to teach the kids about just how bad their father was so i had to change their minds.not litarally..but...like....oh nevermind." "ok. Well...time for the party for all of us!" "Yup" "O.M.G.!Liliana.you scared me." "oh.sorry."
*having a great time*
"mom?" "yes dear?" "dad is calling from the dead."
"OH MY GOSH!" "What's the matter Maranda?!" "my husband is still trying to kill you."
*gasp* "how?!" "from the dead world.They have an extra life!and he's trying to kill you with that extra life.You should like get the heck out of here."
end of chap.22! please comment!
chap.21
Alices' P.O.V.
Well everything was going fine until Carson and i found out
That Liliana has had a boyfriend like just a little while ago.
She showed us some pics. for proof......
When she was 15...
When she found out she had to risk her life for mine...
We were kinda mad when we found out.But who cares!They're getting married in a couple of hours.And we were first on the list.And by the way,we just barely found out that his name was Conner.
"Connor,do you take this beloved woman to be your wife?" "I do" "Liliana,do your take this beloved man to be your husband?" "I do" "you may kiss the bride"
And then after they kissed,Malehindras' wife came in......
"oh.Maybe i should do a more...lievely color....
"Much better.And now for the good part....."
end of chap.21!Like i said.it doesn't end when you think it does.please comment!
Well everything was going fine until Carson and i found out
That Liliana has had a boyfriend like just a little while ago.
She showed us some pics. for proof......
When she was 15...
When she found out she had to risk her life for mine...We were kinda mad when we found out.But who cares!They're getting married in a couple of hours.And we were first on the list.And by the way,we just barely found out that his name was Conner.
"Connor,do you take this beloved woman to be your wife?" "I do" "Liliana,do your take this beloved man to be your husband?" "I do" "you may kiss the bride"
And then after they kissed,Malehindras' wife came in......
"oh.Maybe i should do a more...lievely color....
"Much better.And now for the good part....."
end of chap.21!Like i said.it doesn't end when you think it does.please comment!
Chap.20
Alices' P.O.V.
"I like how we can just telepot back to your house." "same here."
"remember our first kiss?" "yes.or that one time after prom?"
"yes....or....
When the family went on a cruise?and we got to share?insead of Me and Liliana?" "yes. now....Alice....I love you." "i love you too." "Alice....all we have to do is wait 1 more year." "yep.i can't wait.but first can we PLEASE just get Liliana back?" "yes. let's do what we normally do." "k."
"Hello?hi mom!i'm home."aww.my little baby!"
"LILIANA!"We both cried. "liliana....Carson and i are going to be getting married." *gasp!* "do you not want us to?" "i do!Then you can be my real sister!*shriek!*We are so awsome. "carson...she loves the idea!" "good. because we need to make it to tomorrow." "why?! i have somewhere to go." "oh.ok. Liliana,can you help me with the dress?" "already on it."
*tomorrow*
"do you take this beloved woman to be your wife?" "I do." "And Alice,do you take this beloved man to be your husband?" "i do." "you may now kiss the bride."
"yay!" "congrats. alice."Thanks Liliana" your welcome."
end of chap.20 please comment!
"I like how we can just telepot back to your house." "same here."
"remember our first kiss?" "yes.or that one time after prom?"
"yes....or....
When the family went on a cruise?and we got to share?insead of Me and Liliana?" "yes. now....Alice....I love you." "i love you too." "Alice....all we have to do is wait 1 more year." "yep.i can't wait.but first can we PLEASE just get Liliana back?" "yes. let's do what we normally do." "k."
"Hello?hi mom!i'm home."aww.my little baby!"
"LILIANA!"We both cried. "liliana....Carson and i are going to be getting married." *gasp!* "do you not want us to?" "i do!Then you can be my real sister!*shriek!*We are so awsome. "carson...she loves the idea!" "good. because we need to make it to tomorrow." "why?! i have somewhere to go." "oh.ok. Liliana,can you help me with the dress?" "already on it."
*tomorrow*
"do you take this beloved woman to be your wife?" "I do." "And Alice,do you take this beloved man to be your husband?" "i do." "you may now kiss the bride."
"yay!" "congrats. alice."Thanks Liliana" your welcome."
end of chap.20 please comment!
heads up...again.
Hey everyone!im the author and i want to tell you all that just when you think this story is going to end...it doesnt.so.....BE PREPARED!!!!
thank you.
-AUTHOR
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