Tuesday, June 22, 2010

chap.19 name=Death?

Alices' P.O.V.

"mehertfulaugh!"and a sheild appered arround me.
then i quickly used the kill spell an Malehindra and he died.
carson got out of his cage and we just had to.....

we were finaly ok.bt then i cried."what's the matter alice?You don't have to worry anymore!he's dead!" Then this happened....


Hello Alice.we miss you a lot.and we could only see you when you become worthy.you are now worthy.
"yah.but what about Liliana?"

"alice.you will find Liliana by just doing what you normally do..only without her... and she will come to you.I promise.And I've never done anything to harm you.only to protect you.Trust me.We love you Alice.Now Listen to what we said,and we promise that good things will happen.

end of chap. 19! please comment!

chap.18

Alices' P.O.V.

How could you kill liliana?

*flashbacks*
just her
when we were young

the both of us



her at school

her when she was sad...and i made her happy...

even when we were really young

i will still always lover her like a sister.

"ALICE LOOK OUT!" "what? OH MY GOSH!!

end of chap.18!please comment

chap.17

Alices' P.O.V.

"oh lambaraba"i got free of the cage that Malehindra put me in.
Then almost right after that,this is what Malehindra did to me....look at my ears.

i had enough time to pull out a sword....

"Liliana..be prepared to die." "NO LILIANA!" but it was too late.lucky me that was the fake one.But now i have to find the real Liliana.But i remember that Liliana gave me one tip...never cry in a battle.it only distracts you.i listened to what she said.and it worked.But then malehindra pulled out this evil sword that was purple.i quickly used magic to swap our swords.....this is what i looked then....

I was so mad.
"YOU KILLED LILIANA!" "Yes i did." "HOW CAN YOU BE SO CALM WHEN I'M ABOUT TO KILL YOU?!?!?!" "Because." "AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!"sticking at him but then he put me in a cage.It startd to slowly suck out all of my wizards powers,including mine....

end of chap.17! so sad and intresting huh?! please comment!

chap.16

Alices' P.O.V.

"Nice going Liliana!" "sorry!i just thought that i could take a little breath and it's not my fault i tripped over a wire!" *sigh* "ok Liliana.just follow my lead." "ok"


Malehindras' P.O.V.

"Carson...be prepared to be let go...." "whatever."
"they are here........."

Alices' P.O.V.

"CARSON!!!" "NO ALICE DON'T!!!!!" "MWAHAHAHAHA!I GOT YOU NOW ALICE!"
"AAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!" "LEAVE ALICE ALONE!" "Liliana...don't" "ahh.so your best friend came along too?well...she now knows where where the castle is...so...
she shall DIE!" "NOOOOO LILIANA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

end of chap.16 yes.it gets worse.MWAHAHAHAHA!!!!!please comment!

chap.15

Alices' P.O.V.

"Ugh.Liliana i'm SO THIRSTY!!" "Well...then use your spell book"
"ok.It says..... la ma ba ok on no" ******WATER!******"HEY LILIANA!WATER APPEARED IN THIN AIR!" "No duh.That's why it's Magic." "oh.ok.Well i knew that...it's just....exciting.' "whatever." *sigh* "Alice....let set camp.It's getting dark and plus we've walked now 35 mieles." "so tiered." "good-night Alice"
"good-night"

*Don't worry Carson.We are almost there*



Malehindras' P.O.V.

"Well Carson?Where are your pretty little friend?" "getting closer to killing you." "You know,I'm going to let you go when Alice gets here." "And why is that?" "Because i'm going to put ALICE in the trap!Only a lot worse trap...." "Aand what is that?" "i'm not telling you stupid boy!"

Natilies' P.O.V.(Liliana and Carsons' mom)

"Oh my gosh.What have i done?!?!I swore to the queen that i wouldn't let alice out of my hands!"(starts crying REALLY HHARD)This is terrible!Oh what should i do????Maybe just kill myself.........."

*morning*


Alices' P.O.V.


"Liliana.....Wake up." "huh" "Oh.Alice....sorry." "ok"
"Liliana we have to go!We want to get there as soon as possible!"
"I know!I know." "Then hurry up!" "OK im trying to!We just need to pack everything up." "to olabungu" ****CLEAN!****
"WOW" "oh it's just magic Liliana" "ok ok.I'm sorry about that." "yeah. Lets get going."

"O.M.G.!!!!!" "WHAT?!?!"
"I SEE THE MOUNTAIN!" "WHERE ALICE?!?!WHERE?!"
"You don't see it?It's just a little longer." "But it's night."
"You do have a point lil' ok. We'll get up first thing in the morning."
"ok good-night" "good night"

*early morning*

"Liliana,get up we are SOooo close!"
"ok.i'm coming what about breakfast?" "Already made.I let you sleep in"
"oh.ok. OH WOW." "what?Is there something wrong with it?" "NO!IT'S SUPER GOOD!" "oh.well..thank-you." "we should get going now." "yes.yes we should."


Malehindras' P.O.V.

"Carson...it looks like your little friend and sister is here.
For they have sounded the alarm........


end of chap.15!i know it's long.~_~ please comment!^_^

Monday, June 21, 2010

heads up in my stories..

Hey....um...when ever from now on....when ever there is a number like 20 or 25...
so if it ends in a 0 or a 5,then my chap. will be longer.Because i calculated and figured out that most of them are like that.so........i hope you have your memory hats on...because ill be doing that with ALL of my stories.starting at chap.10 though.
thank-you!
-AUTHOR

Chap.14

Carsons' P.O.V.



*I miss Alice.a lot.*


i remember that.Common' alice...i know your trying your best to just....come and save me....but....it's not worth risking your life for my terrible one.



i love you.and care about you.i'm not worth it.

Alices' P.O.V.


(meditaing)
O.M.G.
"Liliana!Carson needs our help!And now!!!!
I'm sorry Natilie...but i have to take your daughter with me to save carson and the world.thank-you for all of what you've done!bye!"

"ok,but take care Alice." "i will! thank-you so much.you are like a mom to me."
"go have an adventure." Liliana pulls out a weapon...."oh.we will...."

end of chap14 !i cant wait 4 the next one!comment! ^_^