Tuesday, October 19, 2010

chap.34 You will die Connor...

                                                      Connors' P.O.V.

*Stupid Max. Going and killing everybody...what if i killed you?would that be funny?* "Well...i was thinking that for you..." "Max!!!WHERE ARE YOU?!" "hiding....And if you dont know how to hide well...i might get inside your body to kill yourself....and everything YOU think goes into MY head." "Oh yea? Well bring it on! You can't hurt me!" "oh really...." (gulp)



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"Max,you will regret this.........."

"no.............Your whole family will just die in front of your face. Just as yours is bleeding now....."

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!



(yes there is no one saying that.)
srry for the super small chap........i just have to go.love ya all! :) end of chap. 34

Monday, September 20, 2010

hi everyone!and sorry

            srry i havnt been writing in 4eva.ill start writing in a little.
~Kylie

Thursday, August 19, 2010

chap.33 run away Alice.

                                                    Alices' P.O.V.


                                                      "Liliana,our girls are getting older by the second.And the same with us.
                                       It scares me.Because the age that i am now....is the age that my parents
                            were murdured." "Oh Alice.no need to worry about them.Just remember that you can talk
             to them whenever you want." "WHAT?!?!" "Oh i'm sorry for not telling you that." *sigh* "it's ok.
     I need to go meditate.Hey,when the girls get here,just tell them im metitating so dont bother me unless it's an enmergency." "ok Alice,but not a good idea.not a really good idea." "I need to Liliana.i must have to.It's almost not a choise for me.I want to ask them if i can take the crown along with the kids." "ok.but be quick!school gets out in 10 mins.!" "I'll take my time."
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                                                               Meditating
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mom
                                              "Alice.You can't take the throne.You are in danger." "But how?" "Let you
                              Listen to the chrildren"
                                   dad"Yes you are Alice.And you need to find another home."
me.(alice)
"Mom,Dad,I miss you so much." "We know.And...you've dont so much to save the world."
Whatever you do Alice.DO NOT, take the throne."
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done meditating
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"MOM!!!!!!!!WHERE ARE YOU?!?!?!?!?!" "LILY?!?!WHAT'S WRONG?!" "We HAVE to talk.Like...
now."
(thinking)
"Let you listen to the children" "ok.but we have to be quick about it."
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telling story.
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"Mom....i just dont feel safe." "I understand.But we have to stay here a little." "WHAT?!?!?!WHY?!"
"I want to meet her again.see if i can change her.But no need to worry.I can try to change her." "ok mom."
"I called your father and he said he would be here in 2 mins.

"sorry." "i came from the gym." "Can we talk alone?" "oh..um...ok.?"
*********************************telling story.************************************

"And..well.....We can't moove yet." "Well....ok." "first,i need to do something." "What's that?" "I need to go and well.......fight someone." "Who?" "Max." "I think i saw him at work.............."

~End of chap.33 Please comment! ^_^

Sunday, August 8, 2010

chap.32

                                                             Lilys' P.O.V.

                                          "Hey little a!" "huh?oh.it's you." "What's the matter?jealous of my dress?"
                         "WHAT?NO!mine?" "NO WAY!" "Well...meet him later then." "ok."
    
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                                                "NNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!" "what's the
                          matter Little a?" "There is this new girl at school named Lily and her brother Tanner,well,
          Lily stole my boyfriend!Look!There she is making out with my boyfriend!"
"ok Lily.here she comes.look natural." "um...ok?"
"Oh hi little A." "hi." "ok."

"You look familiar....." "Oh really?me?I don't think i know you Lily." "Wait...if your new to the school..how would you know my name?" "um.....friends?" "ok.." "I'm the most popular girl." "Do you mind if i ask what you mothers name is?" "um.....Maranda...." "Oh.thank-you...do you mind?I'm going to have a quick talk with Little A." "That's fine. i have to get back to school anyway." "ok."
"Little A.!That is Lily!and by Lily,i mean, Lestorcamabooet!and Tanner is Ticometer!remember when we were young when our mom would tell us those stories?And that's why she said to keep it a secret that we are really supposed to be in a palace?" "OMG.Lily,we HAVE to go tell our moms'.Ya!No kidding!"


~end of chap.32!please comment!!!!!!!!!!!!!^_^



Friday, August 6, 2010

sad me.:(

                                                      Hi everyone.:(yesterday,my great grandma died.last night,i cried my eyes
                                   out,and this morning when i woke up,my face was wet.i had been crying all night in
                   my sleep.:(so if i end up coming to the webshow...i prob. wont be so enthusiastic.But that's if
     i DO come.my mom,aunt,and grandpa anyone in my family doesn't really want to go anywhere.we're all so miserable.so...ya.I've been trying to get my mind off of it...but i just cant.:'( I'll try to keep writing my story.and don't worry.its getting closer to being done.:) Don't forget to comment also!I'll write as much as i can.Thanks for reading.

-AUTHOR
Don't worry.I'll keep writing.:)

Thursday, August 5, 2010

chap.31

                                           ***************9 years later*******************

                                                   *shopping*   Little As' P.O.V.

                                           "Oh mom!how about this for meeting Lilys' bf?" "no way."
                                  "Why not?" "never mind.just find something else." "Well Lily and i never ended up meeting each others bfs', and...we grew out of those other ones." "ugh.you girls are lucky to have us as parents. how about this one?"
                                                "Cute enough?" "of course." "now your all ready."

                                                       Lilys' P.O.V.
                                                       "I cant believe that we are finally going to meet each others bfs!"
                                    "good for you two." "YEAH!MOM WE HAVE TO PICK OUT AN OUTFIT!"
               "i knew you were going to say that." "ya." "found one Lily!"

"i am so excited!" "i know you are."


(same time saying of little a and lily.)
"she is going to be so jealous."

                    ~done with chap.31!please comment!srry super short!

Monday, August 2, 2010

Chap.30 the meeting....

little As' P.O.V.

" hey mom!i need help!" "with what dear?"
"Lily and i are going to meet eachothers boyfriends!"
"Oh.well dont you think that be a little dangorous?" "no...why?"
"Well....nevermind.Your too little to understand." "aww please mom?"
"no.now lets go get you outfit."

Lilys' P.O.V.

"hi mom!" "ok.what is it that you need?" "How did you know --"
"What you were going to say?well ill teach you when your 13."
"ugh.fine. anyway...i need a new dress." "ok....OH!i have the perfect one."
"oh good!"

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"I cant wait to go!ill finally be able to see what he looks like!"
(little a is making the same exact thing)

"Well?how do you like it?" "i love it mom."
(little A is saying the same exact thing.)
"She is going to be so jelous!"
~end of chap.30 srry super short!my computer is going weird!

Friday, July 30, 2010

blah.

Dude.I am not even kidding you.
im being like the person who is getting hurt a TON!
first i burnt my finger,then at the minnicks' house,i got a
bruise on my shin,then i might of sprained my wrist!O.M.G. what is the matter with me?!?!?!

-AUTHOR

Monday, July 19, 2010

hold up

Hey every1!i have a slight problem.i burned my vein on a flat iron,and i cant type at all with my left hand.so...im typing verry slowly.i will continiue writting when my hand is healed.ok?thank-you and KEEP READING!!!!
-AUTHOR of In The Hall Of The Mountain King

chap.29 name=invite movies

Lilys' P.O.V.

"Mom?" "yes?" "can you take me andmy boyfriend to the movies?
Please?" "you never told me his name.or little As'.*sigh* My
Boyfriends name is Jake.and hers is Danniel.Dan for short."
"oh.ok.what movie do you guys want to see?" "Harry Potter please! and
Twilight!" "ok."

**************MOVIE WATCHING*******************

*I HAD MY FIRST KISS AND MOM DOESNT EVEN KNOW!haha!i HAVE to tell Little A!!!!!!!

"No fair!My mom said that she has to get to know their parents first."
"haha!" "its not funny Lily!" "ok!im sorry.hey...maybe tomorrow,we can meet eachothers boyfriends!" "that would be cool!" "ok.we'll do it first thing tomorrow at recess." "deal." "deal."
end of chap.30 srry its short!and suckish!comment!

chap.28

Alices' P.O.V.

"Liliana,kids grow up so fast." "tell me about it." "no.i mean
Like espeically Lily.today she asked me if she could wear make-up!"
"already?!she's only 8.....today!" *sigh* "i know.she lookes exactly like me
if you were to go back in my pictures." "Well...you aren't jokeing about that."
"Hey Liliana,when does Connor get off work?" "well...Connor said that he got the same job as Carson....so...same time....i hope." "oh.ok.so 5:00" "i dont know.i guess."
"Moooommm!!!!!!" "oh how was school Lily?" "good!i just got a date too!" "Lily."
"muuuumm.he's cute.
"isn't he cute?!" "Lily." "mom.im sorry.i just couldn't resist." *sigh* "ok then."
"Mommy!" "Little A.!how was school?" "awesome!except when Lily ditched me." "tell me.what was so good about school?" "i got a boyfriend!" "oh.well.ok sweetie." "i have a picture of him!" "ok.let me see."
"he is cute.just like you." "hahaha"
"so Lily.when is your first date?Well...we are just boyfriend and girlfriend until 7th grade." "what if you dont last that long?" "oh trust me mom,we will.for sure."
"ok then."
end of chap.28!comment!

oops!

that last chap.!it was supposed to be chap.27
Kathleen found that!so thanx!keep reading!

chap.26

Alices' P.O.V.

"whaaaaahhh!WHAAAAH!""WHAAAAAAHHHH!"
"aww.isn't this cute Liliana?they were born the same exact day."
"yes.indeed it is." "What will you name yours?" "i am going to name
mine....Alice." "aww.your so sweet.ill name mine LIliana.and Lily for short."
"ill name mine little A for short." "haha.ok"
*********************6 YEARS LATER*******************


Lilys' P.O.V.

"finally i just got my first date!he is so cute.and it really helps that every boy has a huge crush on me.haha.hey.i want to tell little A.where did she go?"

Little As' P.O.V.

"Where did she go?All i did was go to the bathroom,next
thing i know,shes' gone!ugh Lily!"
end of chap.26!please comnment!

chap.26

Alices' P.O.V.
*Well....carson is trustworthy....he should know when im due.*
"Hey Carson....how long?" "Well look and guess!"

"i dont know." "your 9 months due.everyone thought you died.you were asleep for a long time."
"Well it is definatly noticeable.Hey where is Liliana?" "in the bed next to you.."
"WHAT IS THE MATTER WITH HER?!?!""dont worry.she is pregnant too." "oh really?!" "well good for the both of us." "yep."

"I like the clothes they dressed us in.What about you alice?" "huh?oh.yes. i love them too."
end of chap.26!hope you like it!comment pwease!

chap.25

Carsons' P.O.V.

*thinking*how is it that possible....
"Alice!I know how you can kill Maranda!!!!!" "Well hurry and tell me now!"
*at an estimated time of 14 degrees,turn an exact right,and hit oh her back while stabbing her stomach right after....* "ok alice!just concentrate and you will know what to do!" "ITS KIND OF HARD TO CONCENTRATE RIGHT NOW!" "just do it."*concentrating.*"ok.i know what to do....."
*PUNCH STABB* "Carson...I DID IT!" "i knew you could."
And thats when Alice fainted from loss of blood.
Alices' P.O.V.
*Where am i?* "Your in the hospital." "huh?oh Carson!" "don't. you
need to relax." "ok.What happened?" "you fainted from the loss of blood
is what i thought...but..." "but what?" "Your pregnant." *gasp!*
srry its short!~_~ please comment!

Monday, July 5, 2010

chap.24

Alices' P.O.V.

"CARSON!LILIANA!HELP!AHH!" "ALICE!" "CARSON!HURRY!KILL HER!"
a knife went right threw maranda.and got me a little in the arm."AHHH!"
"Alice!!she can hurt you!" "but she is a hollagram!" "i know.now go and fight her!"
"ugh!i cant carson!" "alice.im sorry.but i cant.she is blocking everyone else but you." "AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!"

chap.23 name=the run

Alices' P.O.V.

"OH MY GOSH!Were should i go Maranda?!" "i would choose somewhere wise.
nothing to obvious,but yet to.....easy." "what do you mean?" "im saying...... you should hide in his castle."*gasp* "WHAT?WHY?!" "he would never expect you to be there...since he killed your parents there."Tears shreded down my face. "im sorry alice...its just tha-----" "MARANDA!HOW COULD YOU SAY SOMETHING LIKE THAT TO ME?!?! YOU WERE IN THE ROOM WHEN THEY DIED!AND DIDNT EVEN TRY TO STOP YOUR HUSBAND!" "Alice!" "Let the man that killed my parents be gone along with the one and only evil wife that tries to kill me no----" "NO!" "AAHHHHH!WHY ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME?!?!omg that is the knife that malehindra used to kill my parents!" "yes.of course little girl.boy are you stupid." "AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!

end of chap.23 sorry.i cant print pics. on this computer.im on my grandpas. sorry its short!comment!

ok!

I am going to start writing again!yay!

so be prepared.................

Monday, June 28, 2010

so sorry


I am so sorry for taking forever to write...
Ive just been so busy lately and idk.im going to wrtie in a little.
I know everything...just so busy.I will write as much as possible.
Thank-you!dont forget to read.

Tuesday, June 22, 2010

chap.22

alices' P.O.V.

"What is your name?" "thank-you for asking but my name origanally
was Marry then when i got married to Max,aka malehindra,i changed it to
Maranda." "hey.i think that's a pretty name." "which one?" "both.But i like
Maranda" "oh.um....thank you." "but i'm not here for distruction."(relef went through the room) "But my son and daughter is." *gasp!* everywhere. "i just came here for the wedding." "You arn't as bad i expected an evil villan to be..." "Well that's because i'm not really evil.He locked me because of my beauty and wanted to marry me.We had two kids and their names are Tanner and Lily.And their names now are Ticometer and Lestorcamabooet.But....they take after their father...at least...they used to....i started to teach the kids about just how bad their father was so i had to change their minds.not litarally..but...like....oh nevermind." "ok. Well...time for the party for all of us!" "Yup" "O.M.G.!Liliana.you scared me." "oh.sorry."
*having a great time*

"mom?" "yes dear?" "dad is calling from the dead."
"OH MY GOSH!" "What's the matter Maranda?!" "my husband is still trying to kill you."
*gasp* "how?!" "from the dead world.They have an extra life!and he's trying to kill you with that extra life.You should like get the heck out of here."

end of chap.22! please comment!